A funny thing happened on the way to editing a large manuscript for a friend and book publisher . . . A case of first impressions — not good ones — ended the editing effort before the end of the first chapter . . . section . . . it was hard to tell. The submission had come from someone who was not a writer but the publisher was anxious to acquire the subject matter for publication. This meant, for me, a book doctoring job more than an edit, but it was proposed as a straight edit, sight unseen, and thus the rate to do the edit was less than half the lowest going rate, largely as a favor to the publisher, who happens to be otherwise quite visionary and aggressive in what he chooses to publish. But the manuscript was in bad shape on arrival and impossible to follow. Even after being informed of the problems, the publisher wanted me to take a shot at a fix. When it takes months to plow through one “chapter” of the book of undefined scope, it is not an editing gig. This book forced me to wear two hats: developmental and copy editor — in basic terms — a book doctor with a patient on life support.
So how did it go with the author? After offering detailed feedback and many recommendations — the fixes — via the publisher, not great. While most authors are typically overwhelmed by criticism and more or less grateful for the inputs, this was not the case and the author responded defensively; it was anger. Trying to cure a manuscript as bad as this one was is a daily headache. To get this reaction from the author, who clearly believed that nothing was wrong with the work submitted, was stressful. In my experience, this writer reaction to critique is rare. The publisher was also dismayed at the reaction.
To attest to how bad this was from the start, after months of trying to whip the manuscript into shape, it was only fair to inform the publisher that while developmental editing and rewriting entire sections would continue, there was no way the publisher’s money could be accepted for the effort. To that point, the rate agreed to with the publisher, again, was well below the going rate for book doctoring. This was a $15,000 to $25,000 job — easy. The publisher knew this after seeing pages of comments from me regarding the manuscript. Reports to the publisher on a regular basis are important because the publisher is your partner in the effort to get a writer on track.
So, what stood out and what can you take away from it: Two things stood out immediately:
- the overall submission lacked proper construction. There was no proper introduction and no narrative arc — a proper beginning, middle, and end — to the work. This submission struck me as a body of research that required division into at least FIVE+ books. To organize the book for writer feedback, an order of the book was crafted by me to make the point the material carved out to a single book should flow and a template would achieve this.
- An edit of the entire body of research — in excess of 600,000 words — yes, you read that correctly, was not possible. Rewriting heavily in the first chapter/section to demonstrate proper use of subject reference, sentence structure, and narrative flow ate up the limited budget for the edit gig.
Other problems drew quick attention and criticism: When you make a statement on your book or devise a premise to some of the research material, you must cite at least two and preferably three sources to corroborate the assumption/finding. No spurious or conspiracy theory is needed/required. Just document thoroughly and be accurate in your endnotes and bibliography (which, in this edit job, required an entire verification of EVERY source and proper formatting) as to where you gleaned the information. From the introduction to the blurb for the book cover, the author must make it clear why the author’s narrative — your “take” — on these subjects should be published and thus read. What makes it stand out. If you don’t know, the publisher and editor can’t do it for you. Convince us. Make your argument. The author of this aforementioned work had not done the heavy lifting. Citing others’ works one after the other without much original thought on the subject matter isn’t what publishers of full-length manuscripts need to see; they need more than aggregation. Think like and of your editor when you write; it can save your manuscript from costly delays in the pre-publication phase and make you a better writer.
Amy Waters Yarsinske is the author of several best-selling, award-winning nonfiction books, published regionally, nationally, and internationally. Amy’s proposal technique was featured in literary agent/author Peter Rubie’s Telling the Story: How to Write and Sell Narrative Nonfiction; she also did a National Press Club panel with Rubie during the No One Left Behind press tour. She has been a regular contributor with international, national, and regional media, to include continued guest spots on national radio. An American in the Basement: The Betrayal of Captain Scott Speicher and the Cover-up of His Death won the Next Generation Indie Book Award for General Non-fiction in 2014, and No One Left Behind: The Lt. Comdr. Michael Scott Speicher Story earned her literary awards, an incredible press tour, and national/international recognition. With over 30 years in the publishing industry, Amy has published over 85 nonfiction books, most of them spotlighting current affairs, the military, history and the environment with a few biographies and corporate histories interspersed. Amy graduated from Randolph-Macon Woman’s College in Lynchburg, Virginia, where she earned her bachelor of arts in English and economics and the University of Virginia School of Architecture, where she earned her Master of Planning and was a DuPont Fellow and Lawn/Range resident.
Have you ever gotten an email from someone claiming to be a Nigerian prince and promising you millions of dollars? Did you assume he was telling the truth, or did you question his authenticity?
Karin Beery is a published author and editor with experience in traditional and self-publishing, freelance editing, and editing for publishers. She is an active member of Advanced Writers and Speakers Association, Christian Authors Network, and the Christian Proofreaders and Editors Network, as well as a PEN Institute instructor. Her specialty is substantive fiction editing with an emphasis in romance and women’s fiction.
Growing up in a minuscule town in eastern Kentucky, I was a good student, a teacher’s pet, and a bookworm.
John Early McIntyre has been a professional editor for nearly 40 years, more than 31 of them at The Baltimore Sun, where he has headed the copy desk. John earned an undergraduate degree in English from Michigan State University, where he was elected to Phi Beta Kappa, and a master’s degree in English from Syracuse University, where he was a university fellow. John has taught copyediting at Loyola University Maryland since 1995. A charter member of the ACES: The Society for Editing, he served two terms as its president. John has presented workshops on writing and editing at conferences and publications in the United States and Canada.
Yateendra Joshi, has been copyediting scientific and technical documents for more than 30 years and helps researchers and academics get published in high-impact-factor journals. Certified as a master editor by the Board of Editors in the Life Sciences — only 30 editors worldwide have been thus recognized so far — and a former researcher himself, Yateen has taught full-semester courses on technical writing, has conducted more than 30 shorter training programs, and as many webinars from March 2020 to December 2021 on successful submissions to high-impact-factor journals. Yateen is a member of the editorial board of Information Design Journal, was elected for the second term (2021–2023) as a member of the council of the European Association of Science Editors, and is a professional member of the Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading. His book, Communicating in Style, was favorably reviewed by a dozen international journals and newsletters, and the late John le Carré called it “A gem. Courteous, unfrightening and essential. A perfect companion to Fowler’s A Dictionary of Modern English Usage for today’s communicators.”
A farmer on a horse looks at the Tungurahua volcano eruption on December 10, 2010, in Banos, Cordillera, central Ecuador. (Photo by Kseniya Ragozina)[/caption]
There is a little-known field on the website of The Associated Press Stylebook that lets users outside AP offer suggestions for updates for the style guide. I’ve dug my way through various layers to find it, and I’ve offered my thoughts on various minor questions of language and usage. The most recent was one of the more inconsequential, I thought, but it was also a relative no-brainer. AP Stylebook took my suggestion, even
This illustrates a strength of the AP Stylebook over other reference sources — it responds quickly when it needs to. It was updated almost immediately after I brought Ecuadorian to the Stylebook editors’ attention. Every spring, the book publishes anew with scores of changes and additions. Between editions, the online version updates as needed. Some recent additions include advice on reggaeton, the musical style, and on the United States–Mexico–Canada Agreement, the successor to the North American Free Trade Agreement (the initialism USMCA is acceptable on first reference with a definition, but spelling it out is preferred).
Mark Allen is an editor, writer, and teacher focused on helping people communicate with clarity and honesty. He has trained hundreds of editors and writers on a variety of topics, including the latest and most important elements in the Associated Press Stylebook and the Chicago Manual of Style. Mark has led conversations about copyediting and writing at conferences and workshops in Detroit, St. Louis, Las Vegas, New Orleans, Philadelphia, Portland, Columbus, Chicago, Pittsburgh, New York City, and York, England. He was the first freelancer elected to the executive board of ACES: The Society for Editing, and Mark currently teaches advanced copyediting for UC San Diego Extension’s copyediting certificate program.
Mary E. DeMuth helps people to turn their trials into triumphs. She mentors new authors through the publishing process and has written two tutorials on book proposals (one for fiction and another for nonfiction). An expert in Pioneer Parenting, Mary enables Christian parents to navigate our changing culture when their families were not good faith examples to follow. Her parenting books include Authentic Parenting in a Postmodern Culture (Harvest House, 2007), Building the Christian Family You Never Had (WaterBrook, 2006), and Ordinary Mom, Extraordinary God (Harvest House, 2005). Mary also inspires people to face their trials through her real-to-life novels, including Watching the Tree Limbs (nominated for a Christy Award) and Wishing on Dandelions (NavPress, 2006). A pioneer parent herself, Mary and her husband, Patrick, reside in Texas with their three children. They recently returned from breaking new spiritual ground in Southern France, where they planted a church.
Barbara McNichol is a nonfiction editor, who works with authors, speakers, and business professionals to add power to their pen through the written word. Barbara wrote Word Trippers: The Ultimate Source for Choosing the Perfect Word When It Really Matters. She offers helpful writing tips weekly and a course to take your writing and editing to the next level: “WordShops: Strengthen Everything You Write.”