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Emotions, the Characters We Love to Hate, and Paying It Forward

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February is all about emotions, specifically love because of Valentine’s Day. Emotions are one of the keys to a great novel. Without them, there is no connection between reader and story or reader and author. Emotions are also a core component of the conflict that drives a novel forward.

Think about your own experience. When is the last time you kept reading a book you didn’t feel strongly about? Probably not recently. But sometimes we “hate-read” books we don’t like just like we “hate-watch” TV shows we don’t like — either waiting for them to get better or continuing on because we just can’t believe how truly bad they are. In the same vein but on the opposite end, we read books we love because we can’t wait to see what happens next.

Then there are the characters. Obviously there are those we love and care about but some of the best are the ones we love to hate. Any character that strikes us with strong emotion (positive or negative) is a testament to the skill of the author (or actor, if it is on TV). I still remember the first time I encountered a character like that. I was probably 18 or so and watching the show Roswell (the original, not the remake. Yes, I am that old). The character of Tess made me so mad, I was in awe of how much I hated her. (Oddly enough, the actress who played her, a very young Emily DeRaven, has become one of my all-time favorite actors.)

As an author, I still keep Tess in mind when writing my villains. They are ton of fun to write and if I can make my readers feel an ounce of the loathing I felt for Tess, I have truly accomplished something. It’s hard to explain how to do that. You have to create a character who is abhorrent, but give them qualities that still make them attractive at the same time. So they can’t be cardboard evil; you have to feel sympathy for them as well. For example, in my only contemporary novel, Been Searching for You, there are two villains, Nick and Mia. Nick is a total jerk, but he has a history of being kind to the main character, Annabeth, so while you don’t want to see the two of them together, you can’t totally hate him, either. Mia is Annabeth’s best frenemy.  She’s complete witch but you also see her taking care of Annabeth as well, so while you want to shake or slap her, you can also see why Annabeth keeps her around.

But emotion isn’t just for the page and the reader. It’s for the author, too. There is a saying “no tears in the writer, no tears in the reader,” meaning if we don’t feel emotions (yes, I have actually cried while writing certain scenes) they won’t translate to our readers and make them feel what we want them to. That is why as an author, it is so important to get inside the heads of your characters and really feel what they are feeling. It shows when you do.

And honestly emotion is why I am here as well. Part of the reason why I write historical fiction is to educate. While my stories contain elements of fiction, because I write biographical historical fiction, they are also highly factual, where I can be. I want people to read my books and come away wanting to do their own research to find out more about the people and events in my books.

That same impulse, to teach and share, is why I agreed to be NAIWE’s Novel Writing Expert. I love to pass on what I have learned (often the hard way) to other writers.

 

Nicole Evelina is a USA Today bestselling author and biographer who writes historical fiction, nonfiction, and women’s fiction. Her six books have won more than 40 awards, including four Book of the Year designations. Nicole was named Missouri’s Top Independent Author by Library Journal and Biblioboard as the winner of the Missouri Indie Author Project in 2018 and has been awarded the North Street Book Prize and the Sarton Women’s Book Award. One of her novels, Madame Presidentess, was previously optioned for film.

Categories: Characters, NAIWE Board of Experts, Nicole Evelina, Writing

7Cs

Monday, December Post a comment

I wanted to share with you today some things I learned at our International Association of Business Communicators (IABC) meeting last week from our guest speaker Carol Daniel of KMOX radio here in St. Louis.

The seven Cs of communication is a list of principles for written and spoken communications to ensure that they are effective. The seven Cs are

  1. clear
  2. correct
  3. complete
  4. concrete
  5. concise
  6. considered
  7. courteous

Other notes:

  • Does your message/story matter?
  • Does it move people?
  • Does it break through?
  • Does it carry any weight at all?
  • Your target is shell shocked from everything that has been going on.
  • Say what needs to be said.
  • We are all powerful as individuals and should speak truth. Once we do, it is out there and our job is done. It is up to the receiver to do with it what they will. But we have spoken the truth and that is very important.

 

Nicole Evelina is a USA Today bestselling author and biographer who writes historical fiction, nonfiction, and women’s fiction. Her six books have won more than 40 awards, including four Book of the Year designations. Nicole was named Missouri’s Top Independent Author by Library Journal and Biblioboard as the winner of the Missouri Indie Author Project in 2018, and she has been awarded the North Street Book Prize and the Sarton Women’s Book Award. One of her novels, Madame Presidentess, was optioned for film.

Categories: Nicole Evelina, Writing

“Everyone Has a Book in Them”: Ways to Tell if Your Book Should Be Published

Saturday, July Post a comment

One of the most frequent responses people have when they find out I am an author is something along the lines of “Oh, I’ve always wanted to write a book about XYZ.” While that can get annoying, it’s perfectly valid. There’s a reason that the phrase “everyone has a book in them” exists.

 

Try It Out

But how do you know if you really do have a book in you? The easiest way is to try out writing and see what happens. What do you want to write about? Write down every idea you may wish to cover in your book. If it’s fiction, can you shape it into the rough outline of a plot or at least the beginning of one? If it is nonfiction, can you group your ideas into chapters? Once you have this roadmap, you’re ready to write.

Start small. Don’t freak yourself out by thinking now you have to write this whole book. No, you don’t. At this point, you are just writing for you. Every chapter tells a story. Look at your outline and think about what the story is for your first chapter. Maybe it is how your hero got himself into his current mess or an overview of how you came to be interested/trained in the subject you’re writing about. Concentrate on telling that story right now. The other chapters will come in their order.

 

What’s the Answer for You?

If you find that this exercise is fun or that it comes easy to you, you may well just have a book in you. Or you may find that what you are writing morphs into something else entirely; you may have a short story, poem, song, or screenplay in you instead. Wherever your muse takes you, follow.

There are a few other ways to tell if you might have a book in your future:

  1. You enjoy writing. For most authors, writing is like breathing; we couldn’t survive without it and get anxious when we aren’t working on one story or another. It’s a truly transportive experience.
  2. You’re passionate about your subject/story. This will come through in your writing and readers will be able to tell. They can also tell when you’re not. Plus, you need to have passion for it because you’ll be with this story for a long time.
  3. You can stick with it. It can take years to write a book, especially when you are just starting out. Not to mention all the edits that go into making it great. If you aren’t the kind of person who can maintain interest for a long period, writing long-form things like books may not be for you.

You do not have to write every day, in spite of what some people say. When the muse is there, grab it. Write early in the morning or late at night after others have gone to bed. Write on your lunch hour, when you have a few spare minutes (even 10–15 will yield you a few words), or when you’re waiting at the doctor’s office. Eventually all those words add up.

And you get better as you go along. If you keep at it, don’t be surprised if by the end of your book, you hate the beginning. That’s because you’ve grown along the way. And it happens to most writers with every single book they write.

My last piece of advice is to read. Read as much as you can in the genre in which you are writing. Believe it or not, you become a better writer the more you read because you begin to see the commonalities in plot and character structure, what works well and what should never happen again. You’ll see turns of phrases you like and descriptions you want to imitate. There is no training ground like the page.

Now, get your butt in a chair and fingers on that keyboard. (After you’ve outlined, of course.)

 

Nicole Evelina is a USA Today bestselling author and biographer who writes historical fiction, non-fiction, and women’s fiction. Her six books have won more than 40 awards, including four Book of the Year designations. Nicole was named Missouri’s Top Independent Author by Library Journal and Biblioboard as the winner of the Missouri Indie Author Project in 2018 and has been awarded the North Street Book Prize and the Sarton Women’s Book Award. One of her novels, Madame Presidentess, was previously optioned for film. She also has four non-fiction books due to be published from 2022–2024.

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